When I was in grad school, I was exposed to a book titled Uptaught by Ken Macrorie. It’s out-of-print now, but it was one of the most influential books I ever read on the subject of how to teach writing. (To see the rest of this post, click “Read More” below.)
This assumes that writing can be taught to begin with, for I firmly believe that the best writing teachers are mentors, nothing more. Every student must find his or her own way. But that is exactly what this book was about.
The book’s thesis was very simple: stop telling kids what to write about. Let students choose their own subject matter within very broad parameters. And go easy on the grading (not that commentary should be avoided altogether). What incentive is there for a kid to do better when he or she is told that intimate thoughts are trash?
Macrorie, a professor at the University of Michigan, obtained the following results after several years of departing from the traditional writing curriculum: as if by magic, students didn’t make nearly as many grammatical mistakes; organization seemed to take care of itself; and the writing was fresh, descriptions were vivid. The students stopped writing dull essays, what Macrorie called “Engfish,” a word that occasionally cropped up in “regular” writing assignments. He found that when students were genuinely interested in a topic, many of the rules took care of themselves. I think this applies to writers of all ages.
The lesson is simple. Real writing doesn’t come from a textbook. It comes from inspiration. Traditional writing courses are similar to teaching kids to never color outside the lines. (The Anti-Coloring Book encourages children to form some of the picture lines themselves.) Such courses produce conformity, not creativity. Rules there must be … but I’m suspicious of most of them.![]()
Wednesday, November 12, 2008
Writing: When the Pressure Is Off
Posted by Billy at 12:10 PM
Labels: teaching writing, writing
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Yeah, I totally agree. As I've been writing, I've noticed that many of my grammar mistakes have gone away. Granted I can't tell you the fundamentals of the language but I'm learning what it LOOKS like.
Hear, hear! I'm in full accordance with you William.
I think too that writing in any genre is highly affected by the fad of the day. I attended a poetry course one time but was constantly in trouble with the teacher for not writing in free verse - rhyming poetry was passé I was told. Needless to say I failed the course.
Years later my work turned to free verse of its own accord - I now write all forms of poetry. But there was a time in between where I didn't write. I often wondered had the teacher been more understanding would I have been less disenchanted and not wasted those years. As you point out creativity does not come from rules.
Raises very interesting questions.
I guess this broadens the issue, but I remember reading Liam Hudson years ago - Two English Schoolboys (?) - as to the implications for taking what is an overall convergent approach to education, with IQ testing which forces the colouring within the lines approach... effectively stifling creative thought rather than cultivating holistic thinking (which naturally produces the goods re rules?).
I signed up for nano wrimo last week, and decided to do a free writing exercise (on what I was doing creatively, and why, across the board) for a few hours to get into it. Did 11k in 8 hours, and it shifted a number of mental blocks because of the unusual 'overview' and removal of constraints to compartmentalize.
Went beyond journaling. I fancy trying what you've suggested here as a no-holds barred exercise for writing.
Madison, I've always thought learning by doing made sense -:)
Janice, I think teachers (sometimes)do more to set back the cause of learning than other societal factors. Not only do "rules" get in the way, but we're teaching an 80 year-old curriculum based on the educational philosophy in the early 20th century that "everything that exists can be learned."
Julie, I do believe that kids do need to learn the basics because here in the US, they have far fewer skills after graduating from college than they did 20-30 years ago. But I am a big believer in free writing exercises to free up the gray matter. Plus I also believe in drastic curriculum reform (see my response to Janice above). I am planning a post on this, with a "badge/widget" that people can grab and spread around the web that will lead to a comprehensive page on why the present curriculum is failing. It would be cool if it ever went viral.
Great post. I've often wondered if I went back to school for writing, what could they teach me that I couldn't pick up from reading voraciously? But I like what you said about writing instructors being mentors. I ultimately decided the pay-off would be the feedback and discussion with a community of other - and more experienced - writers.
i agree, rachel. save your money. all writing classes do anyway is break into small groups and talk and peer edit--well, a generalization, but mostly true.
As always, I LOVE to read your posts Billy.
I wrote a blog about this awhile back. I was really pissed about a lot of things, so I cut myself wide open and emotionally bled all over myself. This is something I feel very strongly about, and it's cool to see others that feel the same.
Are you sure your not wearing a secret "wavelength" head band I don't know about??? :D
Oh, and by the by....
I found the "What the Bleep Do We Know" movie on youtube. All 16 parts. Going to watch ALL of it when I get the chance tomarrow.
Funny thing is, a long time ago, I saw that vid on someone's myspace and started watching it, and totally got into it, but never finished it. But I remember thinking, "Man, I need to find out what this movie is called, so I can rent it or something."
Life is just so awesomely ironic like that, is it not?? I'm glad we've stumbled onto one another's paths. :)
Interesting, Billy. Here in Connecticut we torture our children with a Connecticut Mastery Test in reading and writing. Among other things, we test for an ability to link text to life. I am always thunderstruck by teachers who take a dry workbook lesson and try to back it into life. Why not take some real, live, current text and let the connection make itself? Will we ever learn? Thinks about which to be passionate are right in front of us. We have only to look.
Realm, yes, I do wear a headband, but only around the house. The police at the mall last week didn't understand what I was doing :) ... and let me know what you think of the movie. It's a mindbender!
Sandy, "when will we ever learn?" Good question. Humans seem to be, uh, slow :) I think teaching for the test is a scourge in almost every state now, or similar programs that dictate teachers keep moving through textbooks even if the class obviously hasn't assimilated a point yet.
I had a creative writing teacher years ago, who gave us very few parameters and granted us entire classes to free write. We were allowed to talk with other students, share our work and above all, he never criticized our work. He treated each story with such respect and caring. He didn't worry about grammar or the particulars, but we all loved the process and having a safe place to share what was truly ours.
This was a wonderful post and I wish I could read the book you mentioned.
Linda, thanks. I feel validated. THis kind of approach only works when the school and/or teacher is really motivated to stick with something different. Most schools would never try it. The book was cool but has been out of print for years unless there's a copy for sale online somewhere.
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